How else can I improve? The bottom lip is particularly hard

I made this for a birthday.

I bought the digital texture pack with these sprinkles and I want to try them out.

This is a digital art pattern design inspired by old taiwanese drama (kind of like the Mandarin version of Telenovela) where the women are always crying and in distressed😭.

I have been going back and forth with this and at this point i think i need an objective opinion.

Should I bring the figure's robe all the way to the bottom of the canvas or just let it float?

Oil and gold leaf on canvas 60x60

I tried a second time with another Sargent Painting and I think this time it looks way less „fake“ and is overall just more pleasing to look at.

I tried implementing all the tips I received (especially focusing an texture) and even though there is of course still a lot to improve upon, I am actually quite proud of the result.

Thanks again for the helpful and supportive feedback!

And of course further feedback is always welcome.

It goes in each image from oldest (left) to newest (right), but it is newest to oldest per image.

Imma say I've been drawing these for a week, I pkan to draw more.

Have I improved? I will do a third one with all the tips you suggested.

Thank you so much for the advice and encouragement!!

part of the digital painting series where I experiment with abstraction of plants and flowers and inorganic object objects (such as the water bottle)

Of course, it's too early to criticize, but does it look enough like a city?

This is an update to a post I made a while ago, thanks so much for the feedback, the armor looks much better. This drawing is already posted on social media so I won’t be making any more revisions but please feel free to critique it if you still have feedback. Thanks!

Unfortunately in my infinite wisdom, I decided to add more to the green water(?) version, hence why it looks a tad uhh, different. Also yes is being done in Procreate, the original sketch is on the last slide.

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The edits I made are bigger mouth, smaller head, adjustment to facial contours (nose and jaw), redesigned the inner ear and neck lines, the way the light hits the face (with higher contrast shadows), more saturated shadows in general so they're complementary with the suit, color "reflecting" onto the white shirt, pushed the yellow highlights so you can actually see them, and I changed the background so it doesn't wash out/overpower the focus. Everyone who responded is a lifesaver 🙏