r/Handwriting • u/noryayron • 1d ago

Feedback (constructive criticism) First post, how can I improve

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u/Recent_Carpenter8644 1d ago

I'm curious why you do your a's and g's like that. I think I've only seen those in printed fonts before.

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u/LocalItchy1136 1d ago

You maybe need some fiber to keep that from happening again

In all seriousness, your writing is very pretty! For your lowercase a’s, I would maybe just focus on allowing enough space between the hook at the top and the loop at the bottom, and maybe exaggerate the tail on the right end a little bit more, just for a tiny bit of clarity. Keep up the beautiful writing, though!

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u/iOSCaleb 1d ago

Choosing better sample text would be an instant improvement.

Using the same style for several lines before switching would give folks here a little more to go on.