I decided he's probably not schizo just creative writing. Some are good, some aren't - they can't all be winners. The following comment of theirs, however, deserves all the downvotes. The language and imagery is impressively nauseating and I guess that's the point.
A lot of his comments remind me of wanna-be copypastas that never caught on. But this is just...
"Yes! Yes, yes! My women want food! They're always begging Daddy for food! But they're so fat and blobby, bobbling, bubble babies bumping bulging bellies! Grow your girly girth! Make more mommy mass! Fill, fill, fill your seats, your meats spilling, flowing. More! MORE! Eat your food! Daddy has more! Masticate and gnash and gnaw and swallow! Pack-fill your esophagus and Daddy will arm the cram rod to send it down! Bigger! Fatter! Splattering flesh, thick and heavy, scented musky pinkness. The floor is no more, my women demand so much space, crashing waves of undulating sex, mingling slaps of wetness for Daddy to surf upon while my feeding fork is held high like a kayaker's paddle! Rise your tide, my rotund women, my liquid corpulence, my female sea! A menstrual fog hangs low in the fat lands, as Daddy squishes through, dropping sugary puddings for the bubber's lips to suckle and slurp. Never stop eating, my massive beauties! Flap your folds! Crawl up the walls like swollen slime mold but ten fold as sweet! Yes! Yes, yes! You do need more food! You do need more girth, more fat, more flesh, more meat, more flab! I am wombing within my many ladies and their many blubbery creases! Devour me now! Devour Daddy true! I am the last food and we will be as one!"
Well I think the goal was making readers feel disgusted and they definitely succeeded. If part of being a good writer is eliciting an emotional response I’d say they are an exceptional writer.
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u/spinningwalrus420 1d ago
I decided he's probably not schizo just creative writing. Some are good, some aren't - they can't all be winners. The following comment of theirs, however, deserves all the downvotes. The language and imagery is impressively nauseating and I guess that's the point.
A lot of his comments remind me of wanna-be copypastas that never caught on. But this is just...
"Yes! Yes, yes! My women want food! They're always begging Daddy for food! But they're so fat and blobby, bobbling, bubble babies bumping bulging bellies! Grow your girly girth! Make more mommy mass! Fill, fill, fill your seats, your meats spilling, flowing. More! MORE! Eat your food! Daddy has more! Masticate and gnash and gnaw and swallow! Pack-fill your esophagus and Daddy will arm the cram rod to send it down! Bigger! Fatter! Splattering flesh, thick and heavy, scented musky pinkness. The floor is no more, my women demand so much space, crashing waves of undulating sex, mingling slaps of wetness for Daddy to surf upon while my feeding fork is held high like a kayaker's paddle! Rise your tide, my rotund women, my liquid corpulence, my female sea! A menstrual fog hangs low in the fat lands, as Daddy squishes through, dropping sugary puddings for the bubber's lips to suckle and slurp. Never stop eating, my massive beauties! Flap your folds! Crawl up the walls like swollen slime mold but ten fold as sweet! Yes! Yes, yes! You do need more food! You do need more girth, more fat, more flesh, more meat, more flab! I am wombing within my many ladies and their many blubbery creases! Devour me now! Devour Daddy true! I am the last food and we will be as one!"