Weekly Essay Help - Week of March 30, 2025

[u/AutoModerator]

Hi everyone!

It's time for our weekly essay help thread!

Please use this thread to request feedback on your essays, including your personal statement, work/activities descriptions, most meaningful activity essays, and secondary application essays. All other posts requesting essay feedback will be removed.

Before asking for help writing an application essay, please read through our "Essays" wiki page which covers both the personal statement and secondary application essays. It also includes links to previous posts/guides that have been helpful to users in the past.

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Good luck!

[u/Ksmereka9]

Hi!! I would love to do a Ps swap or get someone's 2¢ on my statement! Pls + thanks!

[u/Rice_322 → u/Ksmereka9]

sure, dm me if you'd like

[u/ILoveRacooons → u/Ksmereka9]

Just PMd!

[u/ILoveRacooons]

Happy to swap here, just PM

[u/According-Solid9549]

Hi, I'm interested in swapping PSs or having someone look over mine -- only half of a draft so far but want some thoughs. PM me! :)

[u/GrizzlyMind_]

Hey y'all, here to help those who need it. I am currently a writing mentor at my university, and I spent approx 8 years in a job with professional writing requirements. I can help with proofreading and brainstorming or anything else that you can think of. Shoot me a DM if you need help.

[u/ILoveRacooons → u/GrizzlyMind_]

PMd!

[u/MarzipanUnable7790 → u/GrizzlyMind_]

sending you a message!

[u/Distinct-Historian50 → u/GrizzlyMind_]

DMed!

[u/PureSavings6426]

Could I just paste my personal statement into a comment or would that be obnoxious lol

[u/Rice_322 → u/PureSavings6426]

That would be obnoxious pls don't. Also, do you really want your full PS available for anyone to read?