r/rs_x • u/Key_Lettuce6163 Noticer of Things • 23h ago
Girl posting .
My affections for you are as obvious and plain as the immutable truths of the world. Is the sky not blue, vast and indifferent? Is the grass not green, stubbornly alive? Do I not love you, plainly and without mercy?
Love is an structural necessity in the anatomy of the human condition, a divine defect even, a curse pierced into our veins at Eden’s gate. Maybe He, in His quiet cruelty, pronged it in us the moment Eve tasted the apple, just as I, unashamed, wish for you to consume me with that same reckless hunger.
I tell you stories, fragments really, of artisans from distant, and sun worn places, who sculpt imperfection and whisper that perfection belongs only to Him. If we are made in His image, crafted not out of utility, but out of desire, then even His omnipotence is only a yearning to be seen.
I don’t know. I only know that I want to love you, and be loved by you, as naturally as the sea reaches for the shore, as inevitably as the sky turns its face to the sun.
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u/Key_Lettuce6163 Noticer of Things 23h ago
Had a few drinks and instantly got to yearning Real yearners let me know if u get me
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u/abortedaccount72 23h ago
Hell yeah I feel you Chief. I’m saving this so I can pass it off as my own to the next woman I love this much. Future me thanks you
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u/Key_Lettuce6163 Noticer of Things 23h ago
Tbh Not even mad lowkey love is everywhere And i hope my words speak to your future woman and she falls even harder for you
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u/DalesofArcady 20h ago
"If we are made in His image, crafted not out of utility, but out of desire, then even His omnipotence is only a yearning to be seen."
I really felt that.
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u/verytinytim 14h ago
Nice. You should try breaking the lines, see how that changes it and if you like it.
With all the commas in here I think it could be interesting to see how it reads with more room to linger.
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u/Deep-Chart3722 10h ago
Interesting I stumbled upon Corinthians 13 this evening (in a film of all places) and then these lovely verses meet my eyes. The Universe is talking to me.
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u/_notetoself 21h ago
she's out there writing beautiful and poetic writings about yearning while he's at home playing fortnite