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u/_Azuki_ Feb 20 '25
It was difficult to tell what it was without the rest of the hand and body. I think that sketching it roughly to "place" the body part you're drawing would be better.
Also, the drawing itself is okay. Though, it does kinda look like the upper part of the arm has a spine
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u/FieldWizard Feb 20 '25
Some basic stuff. Work on your line quality and your forms first. Everything right now is super messy. It’s good to have fun drawing what you want, but skill wise you need more study and deliberate practice with the basics of drawing.
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u/torchnpitchfork Feb 20 '25
The L is the wrong way around, the little nibble at the bottom is supposed to stick out to the right. Apart from that, really cool stilization!
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u/Ironbeers Feb 20 '25
Muscles aren't bulbous round lumps. Potentially they can be, but they're varied than that. Look at Bridgeman's angular figures for great examples of how to avoid lumpy muscles.
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u/HoriCZE Feb 20 '25
You work small, therefore you probably only draw from your wrist and it lacks a nice flow of a big arm motions. Also you focus on small anatomy waay to early. Get big masses first, make them look nice and only then start to carve in the individual parts.