r/learntodraw • u/LemonMelonT • 2d ago
Tried my best to render the drawing
Still need more work to reach the reference level, but it was a fun practice. Appreciate any feedbacks to improve.
Thank you for the feedbacks in my earlier post. https://www.reddit.com/r/learntodraw/s/1mvAKfVyNa
Reference: Terence Cantal (Elise)
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u/No_Woodpecker_1198 2d ago
I already thought the first version looked really good but the rendered one is amazing. Good job!
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u/LemonMelonT 2d ago
Thank you :) Glad that you like it!
Initially, I thought about drawing the portrait only. Then decided why not render the rest haha.
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u/LindsayKnightArt 1d ago
This is dope. I love how you smoothed out the textures so they fit together so nicely.
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u/Warm-Lynx5922 2d ago
push the values more and make the shading less flat by using a core shadow and bounced light on areas such as her left lat, like how you did with the mask
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u/sxdgxrlry 2d ago
amazing rendering wow i hope to get to this level someday!
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u/LemonMelonT 1d ago
Thank you! Glad that you like it :) You can do it! Keep practise and don't forget to enjoy the process of making arts.
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u/toe-nii 2d ago
Wow, that's really good!
For feedback, tbh I'm really digging here lol. They used more contrast in the original, everything besides the highlights is a bit darker. You can actually really easily adjust this with the brightness curve on your drawing software. Another thing I noticed is that your shadows are grey, while their shadows have a blueish-lavender tint. Last thing that's super minor, I noticed is you missed the reflected light on her back, the back of her neck and the underside of her right arm.
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u/LemonMelonT 2d ago
Thank you! Glad that you like it :)
Appreciate the feedback. I will try to work on these areas to improve it.
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u/Roman-Baptistery 2d ago
That… is… AMAZING!!
Whoaaaaah it just looks SPECTACULAR. Like the original one is already sooo clean, and then you come with the rendered one like WHAAAAAT
What software did you use? Procrearte?? You’re really talented, I love it
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u/LemonMelonT 1d ago
Thank you! Glad that you like it :) Yes I use Procreate on iPad.
Btw the 2nd pic is the reference 😅 1st pic is my drawing haha
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u/Roman-Baptistery 1d ago
Ooooh okaay. I thought you first made the poc 1 and the “rendered” it to pic 2, I missed that one haha
Still, as I said in the first comment, the picture 1 is already AMAZING, really good job
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u/mciccDESIGNS 1d ago
This looks really good! I think what’s missing is darker and light contrasts. If you look at the reference some focal points have a stronger light or dark. And also some texture you can add.
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u/LemonMelonT 1d ago
Thank you! Appreciate the feedback :) I will try to work on the contrasts and texture.
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u/DrMouseplant 1d ago
I was like “dang that’s really good I wish my Stu—-holy ****”
You did indeed do your best!!!! It’s beautiful
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u/The_Invisible_Hand98 1d ago
I thought this was learn to draw
Not Learnt to draw
It looks really good😵💫
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