r/oddlysatisfying • u/Vegetable-Mousse4405 • 5d ago

Every expression fits so perfectly.

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u/SokkaHaikuBot 5d ago

Sokka-Haiku by Ohtar1:

It almost looks like

The expression in the eyes

Changes too when she smiles

Remember that one time Sokka accidentally used an extra syllable in that Haiku Battle in Ba Sing Se? That was a Sokka Haiku and you just made one.

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u/Goolsby 5d ago

A haiku is just a sentence made worse with pauses in bad spots.

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u/metropoldelikanlisi 5d ago

A haiku is just

A sentence made worse

With pauses in bad spots

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u/sthetic 5d ago

Ironically, your haiku has pauses in relatively good spots. Let me try a modification:

A haiku is not

Just a sentence that is made

Worse with bad pause spots