Before I start adding more details and rendering could someone tell me if the placement of the shadows make any sense😅 any other advice would also be appreciated!

The edits I made are bigger mouth, smaller head, adjustment to facial contours (nose and jaw), redesigned the inner ear and neck lines, the way the light hits the face (with higher contrast shadows), more saturated shadows in general so they're complementary with the suit, color "reflecting" onto the white shirt, pushed the yellow highlights so you can actually see them, and I changed the background so it doesn't wash out/overpower the focus. Everyone who responded is a lifesaver 🙏

This drawing is of my oc, Outis, he is a short-ish (5'5) man who is around 27. In this picture he is with his zombified son, Barcires. Who he has to guide/drag by hand. The kid is about 8 and dies due to sickness. The world they live in is magic, and when a person dies they have a small chance of becoming a zombie. Outis was so sad about his son's passing that he let him turn to a zombie after death. Barcires wears muzel and mitins so he can't bite people and is show moving.

I'm not sure on the proportions of the drawing and if it looks like he is dragging the kid by the hand.

Any tips are more then welcome!!

my art got significantly lesser attention than other art works and I want to know why. is something wrong with my drawing or are contests just unfair in general? be brutally honest. it's meant to be from the Picture of dorian gray

Beginner artist, finding my style, instagram @mitchell.roberts.art Please review and give some feedback on my art style and what is working for me. Thank you ☺️

Feels like the sketch lost its form

Be honest with the feedback, this is a serious project. The game is getting overwhelmingly positive reviews but very little plays, I was told this could be because of the art. What do you think?

This is a short summary of the game in case you are interested:

Pixel P.I. is a detective game with the novelty of being able to process natural language to interact with text written by the player. One of the main features of the game consists of unlocking statements by asking natural language questions.

The protagonist of the game is Pixel, a hacker detective who lost her memories and is going through a list of old cases to hopefully find information about her recent past.

You can play the demo at https://crischu.itch.io/pixel-pi

Trailer: https://youtu.be/Aa9Ry97Skh4

Back again with another piece, any constructional criticism welcome. As the title saids I’m building an art portfolio to apply for a tattoo apprenticeship🫡

I've been trying out new media and styles, so it's probably aroud that time to ask for critique.

Anyting related to anatomy, placement, and coloring would be really appreciated.

(or any tips on watercolor or oil pastels bc idk what im really doing with those lol)

Graphite, charcoal, black and white pen

I’m trying to do a pet portrait for friend

Is the perspective alright? (His left arm is in the making)

Last pic is reference photo and my progression so far

I know this is pretty bad, please be nice. my webcomic’s new cover! Very rough sketch. Note I usually take my own reference pics but I don’t have access to enough people right now lol

I was struggling with putting their legs in perspective to make it look like they’re sitting down. I think I want the camera to be looking down on them a bit, so it won’t be completely straight on. Also, the girl on the right is supposed to be quite a bit taller than the other girl, how can I make their height difference more exaggerated (about an eight inch difference)? i want the taller girl to have longer legs too.

i want their body types to be different as well, with the taller one being on the unhealthy side of skinny, and the other being curvier. They will both be wearing dresses which will cover up the legs. Any advice on how to draw them holding hands would also be appreciated!

This is a long one, sorry lol. Thanks!

Looking for help on the lighting on this picture!! I had a few people point out in my older drawings that I don’t have a good sense of lighting and shadows, like a clear idea where the lighting is coming from.. can anyone help me figure out where to place the lighting and the shadows in this picture?? Thanks everyone!! I use clip studio paint

This is still a WIP, but I would like to ask:

What should I change/fix?

It might be difficult to look at, but what do you think of the cape at this perspective?

Does the hair look fine?

Is there too much details to where it loses focal point? If so, how would you fix that?

I would appreciate any helpful feedback/tips! :D